My name is Deztini
I am very proud
My name means a determined, dedicated,
down to earth person who is very versatile
I can be stubborn and sometimes mean,
but not so much green
The days I awake are always yellow as I see
Yellow like the sun which brightens my day
I scream and shout hip, hip, hooray
I am very proud of my name as it is different
Although I am not very submissive
To me my name is powerful and strong
Its very unique in the way its spelled
I know different "destiny's", but I don't dwell
There names are different, that I know
I have never met anyone with the same spelling,
but that is never depressing
Depression is the opposite of me
Joyful is what I came to be
I have the ability to be responsible,
which I am
I do everything in the world that I possibly can
I always set my mind to achieve
All I have to do is believe
My name is Deztini
The way you rhyme in the poem jumps out at me because you did really well at it. I could not rhyme if I tried.
ReplyDeleteI love your name too. It is very unique and creative. I like how confident you are in your name and the positive thoughts that you think about your name. Your name really does describe you well.
ReplyDeleteI like how you pointed out your uniqueness in your name. I've met many Deztinis, but not ones that are spelled like your name!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem so much! I like the part "yellow like the sun which brightens the day"! Your poem is so much positivity!
ReplyDeleteYou could've put this poem to a beat and went to town! Good rhymes. You got bars lol.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was very good, in my opinion it is much better than mine.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very descriptive on your character. I like how you used the sun to describe. It gives a lot about you . It was very good.
ReplyDeleteDeztini, I love how you used colors to describe your personality. It added a unique element to your poem .
ReplyDeleteI can relate to the spelling, everyone spells my nickname wrong but I am okay with its rareness. Also I liked how you are very positive about yourself and your name
ReplyDeleteI loved how you covered all the different parts of your name and of who you are. I love how you pointed out your flaws but how to don't let the, bring your day down. This is a very well written poem.
ReplyDeleteDeztini, I just want you to know that autocorrect changed your name three times as I was typing this. Great poem! I love how used colors to describe who you are.
ReplyDeleteI like this poem and how it rhymed. I also like the fact that you don't find it depressing to have such a unique name. I don't mean that in a bad way, I'm just sayin that sometimes for me it gets kinda annoying.
ReplyDeleteThis was amazing. Your word describe you perfectly. You know yourself so well.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you rhymed with your name and how you said you were the opposite of things like depression
ReplyDeleteI love your poem I think it truly captures who you are and how positive and cool you are as well.
ReplyDeleteHaving a unique name is defiantly something to be proud of. Having your name spelled differently than other destiny's makes you even more extraordinary.
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